The colour of your front cover isn't appealing, it seems too artificial and the contents page is incomplete, but at least your giving the target audience an impression of what the magazine contains by using interesting call outs
i like the colour scheme and the layout on the front cover. they blend quite nicely as well as being quite eye popping. i see that the contents page is not completed, but the layout so far looks quite proffesional
The colour of your front cover isn't appealing, it seems too artificial and the contents page is incomplete, but at least your giving the target audience an impression of what the magazine contains by using interesting call outs
ReplyDeletei like the colour scheme and the layout on the front cover. they blend quite nicely as well as being quite eye popping. i see that the contents page is not completed, but the layout so far looks quite proffesional
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